Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my story.


Wolly the Whale

One afternoon in the deep blue sea lived a lonely big whale. Wolly is lonely and he can't find any friends. Wolly can't see very well because the moon is shinning on the water. The whale's friend is a crab.

Sometimes it is a bit tricky to add detail to my stories. I like the sentence about the deep blue sea.